I like the song it reminds me of the late 1980s / early1990s (in a good way). But the video leaves a little to the imagination – a little more than you would like for a music video. If it had a small bit of animation (asides from the gunshots) then it would be wonderful and spectacular.
But then, I scrolled down and found the story. And then. W.O.W.! It’s a great story. Shannon you are an amazing writer – if only everyone could write with such descriptive imagery, creating such a clear picture in our heads.
I can’t wait to read more – I would love to write more about it but I am still full of cold and feeling pretty rough! Head is all over the place! lol